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Warning: this is a yaoi

Marth nervously waked down the hall rubbing his hand's together as if applying hand sanitizer.

He didn't like this, not one bit. He didn't want to ask these things, never the less he was going to.

Once he found his way to the door he opened it to find Ike relaxing on a reclining chair watching some T.V.. He looked back at the sound of the door being opened and said

"Hey Marth. What's up?" Before turning back to the television.  

Marth started rubbing his hands again.

"Well I was wondering if I could ask you some questions?" He said stepping closer to the chair Ike was on, not bothering to close the door.

"Ya shoot." The older teen said looking back but not turning his head.

Marth took a deep breath and spit it out.

"Do you like me?" He asked almost shouting it at the unsuspecting mercenary.

Ike was shocked but lowered his head so the panicking prince couldn't see his face ( not that he could see it before) and bluntly said

"No." Marth was taken back a bit but took another long, slow breath and continued.

"Am I pretty?"

The darker hared boy said no.

Marth's hands were shaking as he held them against his chest tears coming to his eye's. He was scared to ask the next question but he had to know.

" If I were to leave forever, Would you cry?"

He received the same answer.

" I've heard to much." Marth said starting to get a little angry. The frustrated teen turned to walk away not hearing the sound of Ike getting up and out of the chair.

The taller teen stepped up behind the now crying prince and lovingly wrapped his arms around him.

Before Marth could utter a word Ike rested his head on the confused prince's shoulder and said.

" I don't like you. I love you. You're not pretty. You're beautiful. And if you were to leave and never come back, I wouldn't cry. I would die."

Actual poem

A girl once asked a boy "Do you like me?"
He said no
"Am I pretty?
He said no
Then she said " If I were to walk away, would you cry?"
And the boy said no
Then the girl said she had heard to much and turned to walk away.
The boy caught her hand and said
I don't like you
I love you
You're not pretty
You're beautiful
If I were to walk away, I wouldn't cry
I would die
(: hi. A Ike x Marth - love is a story based on a poem, saying, quotes ... When I first read this poem I went Awwww. When my mom read this she cried. I hope you like it as much as my mom did.

I first found this poem ( at least I was told it's a poem) On a You Tube vid so I don't no how wrote it. If you now please tell me. I'll put there name on it.

Here's the vid. -> [link]

I don't own the characters and I didn't write the poem.
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Gamergirl224 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG! I've read this before!
>w<
I was browsing newgrounds and clicked on some random flash. While it was loading I started to read the comments and found this poem and was like: "AWWWW! SUPER CUTE!
>w<"
But me finding it here and with such a cute couple made me squeal with joy! >w<
This is such an adorable Poem!
And I loved the way you made Marth all nervous in the beginning. He is so much cuter that way! >w<
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shadowperla2013 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
So cute so cute so cute so cute so cute SOOOO CUUUUTE I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!
first i was : why so nervous?
second i was :nuuuuu!!
and last i was : awwwwww so cute!!!
Faves!!! :heart: :meow: :love:
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AnimeLoveLover123 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
Thank You! ^^
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shadowperla2013 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
Youre welcome!! :D ^w^ :heart:
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lostpuppy15 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student Artist
Iv seen somethin like this b4 but AWESOME IDEA OF PUTTIN MARTH AND LIKE IN!!!!!!!! luv it!!!!!!!!!! <3 !!!
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AnimeLoveLover123 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
Thanks! :^^:
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lostpuppy15 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student Artist
Welcome !!
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KinClover Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh yeaaah, I heard that thing before...
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AnimeLoveLover123 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Do you know where it's from?
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KinClover Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, I saw it on Google+
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